中考英语作文范文赏析：新生事物评价

　　【八、新生事物评价（热点）】

　　这是中考热点，这类文章的特点是写作难度大，因此需要学生掌握方法，和基本句式，以做到考试时心中不乱。

　　典型例句：

　　1.Computer is becoming more and more important

　　2.we should make good use of it.

　　3.It maybe get in the way of（妨碍） our study.

　　4.We can do lots of things with（有多种方法来应对/处理） it。

　　5. It makes our life more easy

　　6.Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.

　　例文

　　1、网上购物

　　Doing Shopping Online

　　With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn’t step out of the room.

　　It seems easy and quick. But there’s always a trap（陷阱） online. If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big. If you want to be different, you"d better not buy clothes online.

　　Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.

　　2、关于中学生使用手机

　　赞成意见：1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。

　　2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。

　　3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。

　　4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。

　　反对意见：1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。

　　2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。

　　3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。

　　注意：1.可适当增加细节和连接词，使文章通顺连贯；开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；2.词数：100左右；

　　Dear Editor,

　　Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. In my opinion, …

　　……

　　Yours truly,

　　Wang Lin

　　参考作文：

　　Dear Editor,

　　Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.

　　As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to（应该） make the best use of it. Suppose（试设想） there’s a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. There’re also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies. In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.

　　Yours truly,

　　Wang Lin

　　3、书面表达。（计10分）

　　假如你叫李平。最近，你就使用电子词典的问题调查了各方面的意见（见下表）。现在，请你根据表格中的信息用英语给某报社编辑写一封信。

　　注意：1.信件须包括写信原由及表格所列内容；

　　2.书信格式正确；

　　3.书写整洁；

　　4.词数在80个左右。

　　生词提示：electronic adj.电子的 explanation（S）n.解释，说明

　　发表意见者 对使用电子词典的不同意见

　　同学 有用，方便，节省查阅时间

　　家长 便于携带，多数家庭买得起

　　英语教师 对单词的解释太简单，不该使用

　　本人 会使我们变懒惰，不该使用

　　Dear Editor，

　　Recently（最近） I made a survey（做调查） about the use of the electronic dictionary.My classmates think that the electronic dictionary is useful，convenient and it can help to save time looking up the words.The parents also think the electronic dictionary is easy to carry and most families can afford it.But my English teacher doesn’t think we should use it，because she/he thinks its explanations for the words are too simple.I suppose the electronic dictionary will make us lazy and we shouldn’t use it.

　　Yours，

　　Li Ping

　　4.看图作文

　　同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形？请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。

　　要求：⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。

　　⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；

　　⒊ 词数 80 ～ 100。

　　参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n. 气体 gas n.　 污染 pollution n.

　　THE POLLUTIONS

　　① One third of the world"s people don"t have enough clean water.

　　② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

　　③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

　　④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

　　这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点，选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面：

　　1、认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。

　　2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。

　　3、结合所给的提示。提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，考生可以这些描述进行写作。

　　4、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误。

　　下面是两个例文，大家可以参考一下。

　　范文：观点一

　　The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can"t live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

　　I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. We"d better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.

　　范文：观点二

　　The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People can"t sleep well if there is too much noise. That"s why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldn"t make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isn"t allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which can"t make terrible noise.

　　The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.